I like this A LOT better now. There is still a problem at the bottom with the painting dragging your eye off of the canvas. I think incorporating some of the pink and white blurry spots from the middle of the painting down to the bottom of the painting would fix the problem. Great redo.
yeah - it definitely has more of a focal point now, but I think you're right about the bottom - the white on the left is a little too heavy and and pulls your eye down..... will try again
I like this A LOT better now. There is still a problem at the bottom with the painting dragging your eye off of the canvas. I think incorporating some of the pink and white blurry spots from the middle of the painting down to the bottom of the painting would fix the problem. Great redo.
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yeah - it definitely has more of a focal point now, but I think you're right about the bottom - the white on the left is a little too heavy and and pulls your eye down.....
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