I like your new pieces a lot. I think the pieces that have the cloud of black are not that strong--the scribbled black is really distracting and dominates the piece. I particularly like the one with the small bee...I think that it would be gool if you focused on trying to just use primary color (not mixed), then a simple gray shadow for depth, and then just a hind of an image (like the small bee).
I like your new pieces a lot. I think the pieces that have the cloud of black are not that strong--the scribbled black is really distracting and dominates the piece. I particularly like the one with the small bee...I think that it would be gool if you focused on trying to just use primary color (not mixed), then a simple gray shadow for depth, and then just a hind of an image (like the small bee).
ReplyDeleteHey, I want to edit my comment but I can't figure it out...it should reed "cool" not "gool"
ReplyDeleteha, ha, read not reed.
ReplyDeletehint not hind?
ReplyDeleteI agree with your comments -
ReplyDeleteI really overworked a few of the images -
I'm working on a larger painting of the one with the little bee -